Sweet!

First it starts out calm and then the ending area gets really awsome!

A very moving melody.

The trench is dark and silent, until the first flash of gunfire. Soldiers of every race are firing at a an unknown entity in the distance, the enemy returns fire, blowing a fellow private backwards. The soldiers have no time to mourn their loss as they continue to press forward as the enemy to fire down upon the unfortunate platoon. They will not survive.

Great !

Great ! Even if the beginning isn't really nice, i like your song. At 2.30 it start being epic =D. But it's a bit repetitive...