Too much with no build

I agree with skeddles, the song was nice, but things were added too fast, and too much was done without giving the listener time to appreciate the sounds he was hearing. Slow it down, the Mona Lisa wasn't painted in a few hours. Otherwise a very nice little melody, keep up the good work.

nice

I really liked the middle, I thought the intro/outro was kind of unneeded, especially for such a short song, and it kind of jumped around a lot, you don't need that much variety in such a small place, but I liked it, nice and electronicky