Maybe what you were going for, but I can feel literally no beat at all. And unless you trying to make liberamente or capriccioso then you should try to have some discernible beat. While I'm sure you were going to chaos, this was little to much. Try adding focus to the song rather then what sounds to me like randomness. Not saying there's no good ideas, just that it's to unfocused for me to tell. It's upto you though.