Calming and Vibrant
Nice work. I'm not familiar with the original song, but what you have here is good. I really enjoy the upbeat feeling of your synths.
I feel like you could take this song to bigger and more powerful places just by mixing it up a little more. I'm writing a live review here, and I'm not experiencing much change in the overall pattern as I listen to your work. but that's not a bad thing by any stretch. You've put some good work just into the rhythm and synths alone.
Very catchy, yet calm, yet vibrant. A good combination I say!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.