Good job! 7 and 4!
Strange take on the genre..
I do have a few complaints that you may want to address, however..
Firstly, the percussion needs a lot more flavor. It has its variations but what you've got just isn't enough to provide a dynamic background.
Secondly, it seems like you only have the percussion and the wobble for most of the track. I think this could be leagues better with some more interesting pads and high register synths in the background more often to fill out the dead space.
Finally, for your wobble, I would highly recommend a few effects to spice it up. I personally like to throw some light reverb and phaser.
Overall, I'm giving you a 7 because it was a very unique take. You weren't afraid to break boundaries.. But, as mentioned, there are a few things that could use a bit of work to enhance it.
I'd love to hear what you can do with this!
P.S - I'm also in the competition, I would hugely appreciate a review. (:
First off, thank you for the review!
I see what you mean about mixing the song up (more drum variations, synths, pads) and I'll see what I can do. And I plan on working on this much more in the future anyways, Im already on v2 as is.
And on another note, I love trying new spins on everything, I try to be unique with my music, hopefully it will get me noticed eventually. Oh well. Thanks again!
Not real sure why but the tune makes me think of Earthbound actually. Just in a very heavily remixed version kind of way. The piano/synth notes make me think of the two cutscene parts where it tells you what all you have done on your quest so far. The piano notes make me think of the boss battles and the dubstep wobble wah notes kind of make me think Paper Mario for some strange reason.
While the whole beat plays it kind of just sounds very interesting and neat to listen to which is pretty nice anyways. I think the whole beat playing would make a really cool boss battle tune for two bosses that had fused together and become an even bigger boss trying to take you out. This is a pretty cool piece anyways.
Overall, cool boss beat I suppose.
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I dont think I have ever heard of earthbound before, but I might check it out now. Thank you for your review!