Here's ya Critique :]

Make sure that everything that you read here you understand, and if you do not, simply send me a message. I understand the need for critique which is why I'm doing this. I think that this song is a great song START. One thing that I felt was needed was a sense of background theme. Despite the evident House feel, it came as though you were showing a picture of a town, but had yet to populate it with the unique civilians. Even House beats have that feel of a quiet story. That's what makes them so popular as use for action scenes in videos and what not. The viewer(or listener) wants that idea that the emotions of the characters are coming out through song. What you have given here, is only a blank face :|
I made immediate notice of the sidechaining, which was placed well. But until you have fully realized the potential of every type of song, you cannot fully put it into play. In the area of EQ, don't be afraid of some simple bass at all times. During certain parts of this piece, it felt as though it were a gut-wrenching fall off of a cliff, instead of the brave, well placed jump. Please take this review and use it to shape your future compositions.
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