Great track!

AI really loved the first part, but the drum and bass(literally) got too heavy in the second part. I mean even if the first part sound like House, it sounds like damn good house!
I not really sure what kind of feel you were going for, but i really love the first part, i think, if anything use the first part to make a whole different song.

Too Sweet

From start to Finish you had something going on.I like how you changed up and added along the way to keep it fresh.You thinking about making a longer version?Please?Pretty Please?:X

so good,,,

your transitions are like the best on this site, and break rhythm is top notch, seriously my mouth is watering here

Cool

I don't know how else to day it, that stuff was cool. They way it opened up with a techno sound and then turned into a rock song was well done.

My only advice would be not to play the same guitar chords while you are playing a solo, that and it should be longer - and not as much noise/gain (from the drums) Hope that helps.