AI really loved the first part, but the drum and bass(literally) got too heavy in the second part. I mean even if the first part sound like House, it sounds like damn good house!
I not really sure what kind of feel you were going for, but i really love the first part, i think, if anything use the first part to make a whole different song.
From start to Finish you had something going on.I like how you changed up and added along the way to keep it fresh.You thinking about making a longer version?Please?Pretty Please?:X
your transitions are like the best on this site, and break rhythm is top notch, seriously my mouth is watering here
Cool! I´m working hard on those breaks =)
I don't know how else to day it, that stuff was cool. They way it opened up with a techno sound and then turned into a rock song was well done.
My only advice would be not to play the same guitar chords while you are playing a solo, that and it should be longer - and not as much noise/gain (from the drums) Hope that helps.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.