I like it
I like the beat, and the melodies and harmonies. the string progression seems to be very repetetive, but thats hardly noticed. Anyways do you think that you could update us with the lyrics, because this song intrigues me and the effects you did to your voice or whoever the singer is, is causing me to not understand a word said. Thanks!!! Great song overall.
hehe i can't sing so i put an effect on my voice.. its so bad even autotune wouldn't save it
The lyrics are as follows, not the worlds greatest, but i was messing with ambiguity
I'm bound by this longing for suffering, and pain
and I cross worlds with darkness
and fortify my soul with another red stain
forever trapped in my (vain)vein splits open
to leave what's left of me to be free from pain... free
I have to, escape this place
Then the last verse is just a reversal of the first verse hehe.
I would love to turn this into a fuller song with a real singer at some point.
I'm not religious myself, but a few of my friends are, and they believe the song is about Jesus - so maybe I will sell it to them eh? hehe