Damn, this is one hell of a first round. Alright, let's break it down.
n1k V1 - Good delivery for poor lines. You even made up a personal and then said it was fiction. Damn, can't you find any personals? You used a name diss in the second verse, you could have easily switched it over to the first one.
Suddle V1 - Rapping fast diss, voice diss, beat making. Three REALLY good personals. n1k is already on the ropes after this.
n1k V2 - Lullaby/name diss are okay, decent way to begin the verse. A bit more filler and this time your doubletime is actually worse, which only makes Suddle's first verse hurt worse. Girl flip is done the right way - I like the Darth Vader follow up.
Suddle V2 - Immediate player flip, recycle flip is okay but I've heard worse MCs on the site. Waffle iron is a nice finisher.
Suddle annihilates n1k with personals but in most other brackets n1k would have made it to the second round.