Splendid, Love it man :).
It's almost like emotionally someone clinging to faint hope and battling through tough times or the feeling of surviving through great loss. I'm in love with this piece, it's like In par with synthesis for me. it's not static, I can feel the highs and lows of the piece like it has it's own story.
I can't imagine how good the poem is, you should show us the inspiration behind this piece :).