Alright, you did a lot better with this one, though there is still some collision. I like it more then your other though. Fav part was at about 1:20 to 1:54.
Keep it up!
Thanks for the reviews. I also experimented a bit in this song. My later work is less experimental. I had fun making this song. I was trying alot of different things when I made my first tracks.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.