For just 5 hours its not bad. It always takes me WAY longer to complete a song haha. Some tips: If you want to make it better I'd suggest trying to find a better gated sound that has a broader of frequency range hit. As far as the lead melody, I think it would blend better if the sound was more of a powerful saw lead. A breakdown where its just a pad would be cool too. But all in all good start and cool flow! :) Hope that helped.