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I had intended to make this The Perfect Song, but somehow I screwed up XP well, it's still pretty good. Rate it, review it, I like feedback.

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it repeats a bit in the beggining but then it get's better! you said than this is nothing in compare to my music? well i guess your wrong cause i like what you're doing! ^^

MisterJayElectro responds:

Wow, thanks!! If it's all right with you, I'm still gonna think you're better than me with quality of your songs :P

I spent so long on using a ton of instruments for the beginning patterns that I forgot that I needed to change the patterns up too xD But thanks for the review!


This track has a very old school, techy, video game sound to it, especially in the into (A very good part)
Then afterwards, it kind of changes, like it seems a new part starts. You have a lot of potential in this track, my only critique is you can't allow yourself to get lazy.
All the samples you used are too simple, they sound like you just took straight sounds from the program and used them w.o any touch ups. No offense, im sorry =[
I mostly hear it in the kicks and hats, they just sound so generic, I mean the rest of the track sounds sick. The saws, and buzzer melodies are great. Especially the short melody at 0:45. That short saw melody in the back is great.
I would say, just put more time into your tracks, by that i mean, of you know you want a lead, so instead of getting the "Generic Saw" try a plucked sample, a bass, o cut, or just take another lead that doesn't sound like your everyday synth. Just mess around in Fl more, mess around with all the plugins, and samples.

MisterJayElectro responds:

Thanks. This has actually been my goal in every single song. But in every single song, I get bored within a minute of it, and just start doing whatever it takes to finish it. And I've been also working with the drums more; trying not to be overly repetitive. I'm also trying to put actual emotion behind my songs, but I know that a big problem is my laziness. But I'm thankful for a good review of my song!

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Feb 22, 2011
12:57 PM EST
File Info
3.1 MB
3 min 24 sec

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