It's neat but...
My main problem with this is the arbitrary beeps that have no melody and percussive elements that stay with the whole song. Needs a lot more bass, and some clarity. For example, the kick-beep instrument that gets played first at the start is really not cutting it. The 'dip' in sound 40 seconds in is unnecessary, if not, wrongly placed, but could have been used to great effect. The shifts are not prominent enough. When I write, I make the shifts in music really obvious with short transitions, there isn't enough shift here at all.
There are a lot of positive elements about this song. It sounds really spacey, which is cool, and has a really nice feeling. This is definitely not your best work, I remember listening to another one of yours that blew me away, but this, I felt, needed some criticism :)
I'm gonna check out some of your newer/other stuff. Good work so far!