I disagree with the 8's down there... V
I like that industrial glitchyness to it. This would fit well in some sort of a sci-fi environment, with some sort of peaceful surroundings, yet highly industrialized stuff.
You have the perfect sounds in a lot of these, and I really can't find anything negative to say about it. Except maybe length... Not long enough? But that's a generic complaint for anything. :P
This reminds me of VNV Nation, they have quite the same sounds that this song has in the intro in one of their songs, I don´t remember which song though... Great song!!
Keep up your great music :D
It's neat but...
My main problem with this is the arbitrary beeps that have no melody and percussive elements that stay with the whole song. Needs a lot more bass, and some clarity. For example, the kick-beep instrument that gets played first at the start is really not cutting it. The 'dip' in sound 40 seconds in is unnecessary, if not, wrongly placed, but could have been used to great effect. The shifts are not prominent enough. When I write, I make the shifts in music really obvious with short transitions, there isn't enough shift here at all.
There are a lot of positive elements about this song. It sounds really spacey, which is cool, and has a really nice feeling. This is definitely not your best work, I remember listening to another one of yours that blew me away, but this, I felt, needed some criticism :)
I'm gonna check out some of your newer/other stuff. Good work so far!
Reminded me alot of Jean Michelle Jarre (i think thats how u spell :P) so much!
good job :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.