nice and gentle on the ears. especially after hitler hacks linux. i like. :) maybe a tad soft? volume wise. i had to turn my sound up by quite alot.
Nicely done! ^_^
ORIGINALITY: It's fairly original. Maybe a bit to reminescent of something, but MAYBE that's a good thing. After all, this was fun to listen to (like 10 times in a row).
CLARITY: The 'message' came accross clearly, but in this case, i'll take off a couple points for the murky sounding quality. With a good audio program, that can be removed.
DIVERSITY: Not increadibly diverse, but at least it's consistant. I like the mood, so that makes up for it alot.
EFFORT: Since this was your first piece, I imagine you put a fair amount of effor into it. Two thumbs up! XD
OVERALL: Room for improvement, but still awesomely good.
Well yeah, it was my first piece submitted here but in the beginning of my NG era I just submitted everything I'd recorded in my life :)
Clarity is not too good here, I admit, I'll have to try a little compression and stuff if I ever really want this to go somewhere.
Thanks for the comments!
very nice, i could hear jeff buckley singing over the top of it
You reviewed my first submission :)
Yea its cool innit?
I'm into instrumental music. Specially guitar. This one is not an exception. :) Pretty nice.
Thanks Masterok, I appreciate that you're taking the time to listen to my fruits of labor :)
I'm very curious to find what you think of the rest!
Nice and mellow
I really like the mellow, almost sombre mood of this piece. Did you play or sequence this (a few notes sound kinda of MIDI-ish, but other than that, it feels very natural)? Production-wise, I'd liked to have it a bit more spaced-out (ie, reverbed), and crisper (filter out the muddy sections, maybe boost the high-end a bit), but it's pretty good as it is now.
Thanks! It's not sequenced, I plugged in my guitar and recorded it to CoolEdit or something. Back then I didn't know much about mixing so I just left it like this. I'll look into your production suggestions some time, they sound like they could indeed mean improvement. Thanks a lot! Check my other stuff too, if you'd like.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.