Exactly what you should do!
That's what reviews are for- To improve. Is the bass in this synth? In other words, is this all computer generated? Just wondering.
It is lacking something. Believe me. Just needs a hum in the background, up to 2:05 of course, can't destroy that cool bit, but it needs like some looooooong chords going on. what program do you use for this by the way? By the way, I don't like the synths at 0:30 - maybe you could change that synth, and maybe even the notes and then let it run through some more of the song, like the afore mentioned "hum".
But the general beat of this is awesome. Nice work!
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Devereux 
