Sounds heavy..

But maybe it would fit better that you add some heavy bass or pad,and even some sub to that kick it sound kinda mudy,and also less reverb to that snare..
I am just honest,idea is not bad but need*s more work;)

good job

please reduce the bass, it sounds overdriven
but in fact good work :)

greetz

Nice

That wasn't so bad, actually :D.