nice beat... the song itself was ok
Oh gosh, deep music incoming!
I really like your beat, but your lyrics and flow sounds awful man. You don't sound like you have passion, you sound like you're half asleep. Also you keep dragging out words for way to many syllables, sounds awkward.
Still, like I said, your beat was pretty good, so kudos for that. I'd just work on your lyrics and more importantly your flow.
thats a nice concept bro u actually rappin about something nice
ses 4 years and you still floppin son?
you need to lay off the swagger jacking ya ere me bananaboat ey? chi chi mon? lol
Actually I got top page this year.. have you?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.