A Broken Record
Has some nice chords and a good beat, but, im afraid to say, it's extremely repetitive in the beginning, and all you really do is alternate the beat, add stuff, and take stuff out for the first couple minutes. Then it starts changing from a bridge and goes back, with no real change, except i noticed a piano part. Try experimenting with notes in the same key and beat, and just messing around til you get something that sounds good, to change it up.