Pretty good.

I think you have a decent song going on here. The main tune and the backdrop compliment each-other pretty well.

However, it is a little too repetitive for my tastes and that string gets a little too deep into my ears.

Here's a word of advice. You probably shouldn't rely on your fans to tell you which direction to go, as that almost always leads to musical stagnation. Music is a strong form of expression, and if you are trying to replicate the whim of your listeners, you aren't really expressing yourself. Follow your own changing tastes, and keep going in this direction only if you are content to do so.

Cheers!