Really Nice
One thing that was bothering me was the kick, Psy kicks usually stick out a lot more. I also think you made the percussion a little too minimal.
This is a psytrance(ish) endeavor. I kept the drums rather minimalist and droning. I also left it a bit rough in the mastering and transitions because I felt it gave it a sort of charm that a fully realized song doesn't have. Or you could just interpret that as me being lazy and not ever planning on finishing this song. However you want to perceive me.
Really Nice
One thing that was bothering me was the kick, Psy kicks usually stick out a lot more. I also think you made the percussion a little too minimal.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.