Sounds casual

I like the guitar starting, it reminds me of a couple of sad rock songs too. This song sounds like it could use some bass and drums. For the drums I would record myself playing just the top 2 strings and then lower it down to D minor to give it a bass sound. Not sure what to do about drums. Ask a friend maybe.

The two guitars are very good but get too loud at some points and I am sorry but I can't understand a single thing you are saying at all because the guitars are too loud. Your voice is very staticy as well.

Just add a bass line, lower the volume of the guitars and adjust your voice a bit and I think we will have a winner!!