Longer version with vocals
Finally released on NG. Comments are as allways welcome :)
None too shabby
Hey it's been a while my internet is working better than it was (I've got satellite internet and thus have the Fair Access Policy it sucks).
ANYWAYS props girl don't know how I missed this one!
10/10
5/5
Your friend and follower, Omega24000
Very Good
The only thing that needs work is the vocals, as they're slightly un-synched with the melody. Overall, I'd say it's extremely well done.
P.S. Is there a version without vocals?
i made one but haven't posted it i just posted a small loop
the version without vocals has more dynamics and is meant to have a real live vocalist for it.. i'm working on some lyrics now :D
kewl jam...
umm, would u mind posting the lyrics .... i would like to read as well as listin to what u are sayin, thxs (-_-)
I'm right here for you..
i can't let you go..
I've waited patiently - to hold you in my heart
This is what it's meant to be - don't tear us apart
How can i explain how i feel -
My love you're the one ho makes me real
When i look at you - don't be so shy
A diffrent you - makes me wanna cry
Show me the way to your heart
My feeling for you were strong from the start
Keep me close to you..
Because i need you so..
I'm right here for you..
I can't let you go..
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dada da la lala etc..
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I've waited patiently - to hold you in my heart
This is what it's meant to be - don't tear us apart
How can i explain how i feel -
My love you're the one ho makes me real
When i look at you - don't be so shy
A diffrent you - makes me wanna cry
Show me the way to your heart
My feeling for you were strong from the start
Keep me close to you..
Because i need you so..
I'm right here for you..
I can't let you go..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Maverlyn 
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