hmm, i don't know.

The beat is simple but not bad, the keys that you play are a little off and removes to the general appeal of the song.

This time i feel it took to much time before your song was really playing with all the instruments. At the first cymbal hit i thought that the song was over, and then came that wierd sound wich wasn't bad, nor good, just wierd :D

Maybe for the next song try and be little less repetitive. Well you'll see for yourself. I mean, the more songs you'll make the more experienced you will be. Keep at it.