Work more on base and beginning.
As far as Ice Cap remixes go, it starts off pretty much the same way a bunch of others do. It'd be cool if you made it more lively, less subdued, more interesting. I did like when the melody came in, and the harmonies on the guitar (that was a guitar, right?) go along well with it. The trills at the ends of phrases... I'm not sure if that really works.
Just suggestions, anyway. You mentioned it's a WIP, so I hope you don't mind.
Not at all, thanks for the comments. I agree it is pretty subdued, which I will definitely be changing.
And yes, it's a guitar kind of...More a synth run through a virtual amp.
Hmm, I like the trills as of now, but I'm sure when I give it another listen in a few days, I won't like it. I think if they weren't as long maybe...
Thanks though! :)
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