It's an interesting start, but it feels very barebones. You really need some kind of harmonic sound here, find a decent pad to start working with.
You have a decent melody but try making some FX automations for it (filter, phaser, delay... pick one and add some flavor). Drums are pretty OK for techno, add some compressor for a bit more punch.
Oh, it is. I haven't started working with all the details yet. Lol so far its just the basic samples and beats. Hopefully my stuff will sound better as I learn to use all that. Thanks for the advice!