Awesome
Frenetic and powerful. I actually really didn't mind the tone so much. It works for this kind of piece, maybe just some slight adjustments on the filtering and you'd have just what you want. It's close. I think my biggest suggestion would be to work on the percussion. The bass pedal sounds awesome in my opinion, but that snare is so weak and hollow tone-wise.
I think it's a great start to something if you chose to continue it.
Nice job.
[TSR Audio]