pretty much off balance

there is no melody, the two bass drum notes and the clav clicks are basically it. the tempo is off wack and cuts out randomly at times (like before the reverb comes into effect at 33 seconds.

sounds ok though mixing-wise, just musically pretty unsound. i do like the reverse shake and bass though

Not too bad...

Sorry man, I wasnt really feeling it that much, I feel like the beat is either too slow, or it is just missing something.

I do like the sound though, i just feel you are missing something in here, it just seems very simplistic IMO.