I agree with flight39
The bells sounded kind of creepy and unmelodic at times and the begining was preaty bad, If you fixed that this song would be a total OVER 9,000!!!/ 10 and a definet 5/5. So I would get on fixen that. It's a good start, and a great song idea.
I would enjoy the song a lot more if you used a more melodic-sounding rather than percussive synth for the bell part. It didn't really sound like notes at some times, just hits.
Overall I'd give it a 3/5, but it could very realistically become a 4 or 5 if you used a better sample/synth.
thanks, for the insight! :)