That's a quite good first attemt even tho it sounds more like a fast paced dance song rather than DnB. I still think you did a pretty good job at it. but if you want to mess around with DnB i suggest you look some drums up, i'd suggest Amen Break, and look up some tutorials maybe.
In any case it's a good first attempt.
PS: Would you mind checking out my latest track?
It's a remix of the megaman 3 stage select theme.
Thanks for the review :) and yeah lol i wasn't quite sure what category to pu this in, so i kinda thought of DnB, so wtvr lol. but yeah i will take the drums suggestion for future songs. thanks, and yeah it is my first attempt. also, i did check out your song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.