It could be better
There is no structure in this song, you could add a lead synth to make it more catchy, use some tones that people would be familiar with. It's not a bad song, it's just that need a little polishing at the workshop.
Ruben -Acid Paradox-
thanks for the feedback, i was in a weird mode when i made this song, as in i was high. Its not done but i'm sure i'll add some things to it. :)