All a real n***a can do is keep it real!
You need to rap about something "real". This exaggerated lifestyle you put into your music/lyrics is destroying your own image. I noticed.. the more fans lost, the more alts gained on your part. Time to stop focusing on others & start focusing on yourself.. Be true to yourself & alot of doors will open up. It's time for a change and a wake up to reality.
The lyrics & rhyming are quite simple...
Dead - Bed
Larger - Harder
(The rhymes you use is rhymes I'll use in a freestyle)
Also your lyrics did not match the feel of the beat and felt almost irrelevant to what the original producer of the song was aiming for.
2007 - 2007
they tried so hard...
your voice is so boring and your lyrics are absurdly simple, the instrumental isn't bad but as i go through the rest of your tracks i reeeeeeally hope this was just one of your bad ones, cause this actually blows. being straight with you.
A BANGER!!! KO DUDE!
Lejin has destroyed every chump who has attempted to challenge him. And now ive come to realize he is unstoppable! His verses and beats are the illest i have ever heard since ever. He reminds me of eminem when he is in chill mode and reminds me of 50cent when he exposes fake rappers. this guy is easily the king of ng number 1!
wa bam KO
Nothing but respect!
..the beat was produced well, the song was REAL cause you are #1 and you are and uh ye let em think what they want cause cock suckin yes men are frauds every time shit hits the fan then they panic like a cry baby.. i meen but yea it was a pretty good song cept and the chorus was waaay too HOT dooo i love it