Hey! It's me again! Thanks for featuring me in the comments, now to reviewing...
Great main melody. The nice choice of instruments really gives it the delicate, icy feel. Excellent in a cold feeling.
@2:37 - great ringing sound. I think that high pitched is definitely the way to go when you wanna be cold. I can imagine this in a wintery scene. Also, this layers well with your other melodies.
@4:27 this part is just awesome!
@ 00:56ish, this scale upwards into the more brighter section seems a bit out of place. The transition from this into the next section is brilliant though, but I'd rexamine the scale a bit.
@1:54-2:32 this portion is too long. It gets tiring after a while. I was sitting here waiting for the 2nd theme to come up and had to wait a really long time.
Great work! I couldn't find the previous version to compare it to though, so just reviewed it as if it were a new piece instead of adding on.
Thanks for PMing me btw! :)