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Dec 5, 2010 | 11:17 AM EST
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2.1 MB
2 min 19 sec
3.92 / 5.00

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Rated 3.92 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

I actually made this track a few weeks ago, but I felt like it was incomplete, so I hadn't submitted it. But after listening to it again, I just can't seem to figure out what I should add. It's still a good track either way, but I really do feel like it's missing something. I guess I'll figure it out sooner or later, in the meantime, you can vote and give me your feedback, thanks again newgrounds public.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice break.

You nailed the drums perfectly.

The bassline is sexy as hell, but I want to hear more of it. Give it a few seconds in the spotlight, a little solo without any drums.

It could use some sort of lead on top of the drums and bass to give it a bit of variation. Some nice soft strings would work nicely.

It also seems a bit short for a song, but thats just me.

SSJDre responds:

Well thanks, but like I said, I felt like it was missing something, I just for the life of me couldn't think of anything, but taking all of that into consideration, I may be able to make a better version of the song. Maybe giving the bassline some solo time would help, but I'm sure I can do more, thanks for the advice, it's much appreciated.