Mmm.

That is a dirty, dirty bassline.

Very strong until 1:40 where it just kinda trails off. It feels almost like it's building up, but then.. nothing. It's almost screaming for a nice melody over all those arpeggios.

The synth that comes in at 0:50 is nice. You should make it recur once or twice more throughout the song.

Other than that, solid beat, my good sir! I'll keep a look out for more stuff :)

Also I'd like it very much if you checked out my new song :D

could use a stronger melody!

thats about it:)
and mix some of the pad chords up and the beat a tish !
so ya :) this song could use some work! but im glad this sounds like a song! unlike most the stuff lately -.-
but u gave me hope to keep going trew the new stuff! good job
d-(^.^) z thumbs up!