I was just brainstorming some ideas and came up with this. What do you think? :) Worth working on? Yeah I know, I need peptalk to finish something I've started. :(
poor rhythm
The mix is decent and the melody has good potential but the rhythm of the track really lets it down.
I think if you were to revise this track with a more driving drum break and melody it would make it much better.
I love the piano at the start
6/10
3/5
Cool
I Like it
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
asddaw 
