well..

If this was cleaned up, it wouldn't be half bad. The guitar sounds awfully muddy and out of sync with the drums which need to be cleaned up. Especially the double bass. But otherwise, It's a good effort.

ok so

you need a better interface. The drums are super horrible. i'm hearing like this clicking noise....if that is supposed to be the double bass or something. Needs to be corrected with the guitar track. The guitar track doesn't go at all with the drums. Take time to sit down and map everything out.