Pretty good.

This song was kind of simple, if you ask me, few instruments were used.
I feel you could add on to this by adding some pads, as there was too much gaps between instruments, a pad could really help fill up these parts.
The beginning beat could be a bit shorter, it kind of made me lose interest pretty quickly.
You should try balancing low and high frequencies, seems like you did some unnecessary stuff, like decreasing the volume of the hihats when it was pretty much the only instrument in it's frequency range, maybe except for the vocals.. , and the bass seemed to interfere with the kick drum.

Still, I can see some talent in here, and I feel some constructive criticism will help you improve and avoid mistakes. So overall, great job on this song, and hope to see you improve as you keep posting more music.