nice

i like your style you should do some more hip-hop olskool or even modern hip-hop keep it up homie

Dude not even cool

Putting some riffs on top of a already made Fruity Loops tune isn't cool dude.

Make your own stuff or just don't bother.

FYI, for those of you who didn't know, the majority of this piece is not by the original author. A couple minor riffs were added, but it is still very identifiable as a demo song from the Fruity Loops demo.