Could use some quality improvements

The actual song itself isn't too bad, however the quality of sound you are getting leaves much to be desired. I especially don't like the first instrument you use to establish chords. it gets old fast, and doesn't really match which the rest of your orchestra-ish instruments.

I also find that the song doesn't really build up too much. it would help if you could create a bit more tension to resolve, it would make it more interesting. As of right now it's kind of reptitive and has no direction after you introduce all the instruments.

If you just added a high point to the song in the middle somewhere it would help alot. it's not that the song is bad it just feels like it's not a full song. stuff is missing.

Not good yet, but you are onto something.

6.5