This song is rather calming, like the ambience you put into it.
The first synth you put is rather repetitive, you just played the same melody over and over... But I think that's okay, for its more progressive, and you're just adding on more and more sounds slowly.
I think the slow beginning is one of the things about the song that makes people not want to listen to it. Shorten it?
Finally, I think you should try to master this song. Experiment with multiband compressors, limiters and eq. This song is rather soft, as the volume is hardly maximized to a similar volume level to other songs. Let it peak at 0dB.
And finally, try to put something more constructive in the author comments. Just saying 'refer to title' doesn't really help much in getting reviews (though I still reviewed it anyway =P).
thanks for the review i did use an equalizer and multiband compressor in this song but not for mastering i put it on some of the instruments and an eq on the master but not really a whole lot of that.i recently posted a song that features use of the fruity limiter
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.