It has more of an Electro House feel to it than trance, but otherwise you're headed in the right direction. I like the distorted bass in the intro and the almost 8 bit feel to the synthesizers.
Just keep working on your style......you're doing great so far ;)
Thanks for your review! I didn't know this would be so good... My friends didn't really like it... Anyway, I will work on it as you said. Maybe I get more electric power in the next one ^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.