Reminds me of the Spirit Temple

I'm not quite sure why, but this reminds me a lot of the music in the Spirit Temple in Ocarina of Time before the piano comes in. After that, it's really peaceful. It sounds great.

Review

The song sounds good if played with other instruments, but the flute sounds.. forced and unnatural.

Subpar

The General theme of this is nice, but i feel like you need to add some better Tact to the flute and strings, possibly bring down the flute an octave or so aswell. The piano part was rather nice though.

All in all it feel somewhat disjointed, if you make it feel more like a coherent piece rather than several different ones stringed together i would probably like it quite a lot.

Cheers and keep working!

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Flute thing just sounds...bad. Uncontrolled, jerky, forced, and off rhythm.

More Awesomeness

Yet another song that has inspired me to write more! (The feathers portion at least). Currently formulating the teardrops one right now. I thank you and your epic music for getting me out of my writer's block slump! Keep up the awesome work!