That was pleasant. I thought the fuzziness was intentional. In fact, I think that making it even more scratchy would give it a lovely broken-record-like, creepy feel.
I feel like I have heard parts of this before, did you sample from someone? Or is it inspired by someone?
Sounds great aside from the fuzziness of the mic/soundcard you recorded on. :]
I know it's fuzzy, but it's the best I could do. I really just wrote it out of my head, though I've been told it sounds a bit like Bach.