Okay, so far I like it. Try adding in a backround beat and try to work on the tune itself because at some times, there are some parts that are off timing.
I know its tough
to start out making music...
if your doing stuff on FL, then I could help you out.
dont give up youll get it
check out some of my stuff too
i dont know wut u mean by fl im using a midi maker since some of the insturments used in songs i dont own, so i use it record it then make it to mp3 format.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.