a remmake of mellody from above.
Pretty good.
It's pretty decent, but I found a few of your synth choices kind of disturbing. Felt like they were all jostling for their place in a similar tone center, if you know what I mean. Gets a little noisy at the end.
But the melody is pretty good later on in the song.
Not bad, keep it up.
nice melody
great sound man, I like the bass, it's a bit better than the other one. You have quite a good knowledge of which chords work together. You're gonna go far kid :P I really like it, good work :) but you could still improve, no one's perfect, you just get better :D you've got potential to be great (y)
tnx man and yea i know i wanna redo the end it lost its hook but i was like grrr cant figure antthing out so i improvised i think ill work on it later if i do ill let you know
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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