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wiked wiked wiked wiked wiked ima raise up the score for u hey mabye i can do remix on this???? messege me on msn also if u dont have me incase i added wrong email here mine philipbh40@hotmail.com im on msn all the time when on comp cya.....

okay

it doesn't sound like the melody is focused enough, almost like the song is competing against itself. your other songs have been great and i'm curious to know what program you used to create them

its rather good

try adding a little more complexity to it. and deffinetly make it longer.

it was well

a mess like guy before me it was too much stuff happening at the same time so it did not sound to well.

that was major problem clear the song up make it a bit longer take away that Kick that goes every second and you will have a decent song

PiePie

cool

Nice melody, but it seems to be a little too busy, as in too many notes are being played at once.
Also, the beat sounds kind of weak.

I love the echo and how it works with the melody! Just a little too many notes on the main line as I said before.
Keep it up!