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Icyy

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Just a real short ambient tune I made ;)

<3 u all

Oh, and for the people that think certain noises I use are off beat...like I did that on accident or something...it's off a beat on purpose, lol. I'm going for a certain sound =)

I realize this is really short, its unfinished, but will never be finished. I just figured I'd upload it for the hell of it. Sorry for the lack of effort on my part.

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cool pad

Thanks for your review on my track :)

The pad that you use is nice and dreamy--I like it a lot! I do think, though, that if you faded the different notes in and out it so it flowed very smoothly it might sound even better. Perhaps also play with panning, reverb, flanging, and some layering as well to make the sound more immersive and wide across frequency ranges.

The percussion you bring in is also pretty fresh as well--while they sound glitchy, they also have body and a kind of organic feel to them.

This is a short and pretty underdeveloped song, but I think it's a cool sound--keep at it!

SeeD419 responds:

Yes! Exactly! I feel exactly the same way about it! Thank you very much for your kind and honest review :)

Pretty nice!

I noticed you reviewed a song that was a remix of one of my more popular songs, so I decided I should check you out, and I'm not disappointed! In fact, I wouldn't hesitate in letting you remix one of my songs just after hearing this one!

This is good. It's rated poorly because it's lacking in layered elements. I'd say, if you wanted to edit this, add some background drums at the beginning of this (nothing too flashy), and definitely use the mixer a lot. The mixer makes everything better, haha.

Also, if you want this to loop better, either remove the fade out or create a fade in that will lead back to the beginning. Just matching the first chord and having it fade in from nothing at the end would make this 100x better.

Great job!

SeeD419 responds:

Haha thanks a lot! <3 <3

Dude...you gotta tell me what song that was. I downloaded a bunch and have been playing them nonstop lately lol. Lots of awesome shit on here, so underrated.

ARE YOU SHITTIN' ME?!

People think this sucks? They can go to hell yo, I thought it was straight. I love it mang you keep up the good work.

I picture like a frozen machine or something. Like a machine that doesn't need heat to work and is covered in ice. Yeah?

SeeD419 responds:

Well at least someone out there understands me ;)

Much love.

I have to agree with TeHLoY

This doesn't "feel" like an ice beat to me. Ice is a chilling beat. Sort of a suspense kind of thing. This doesn't really give off that vipe, however.

It's ok though. Keep practicing, and you'll get the hang of it :)

SeeD419 responds:

lol nah i just make tracks every couple years or so.

Huh?

The beginning synth kind of threw me off. It was a bit too cheesy, like one of those weird choir pad samples that come with FL studio and sound really cheesy, unless you modify them.
The drum beats don't fit that well, and the progression is way too simple. Since this is an ambient song, you should learn how to synthesize better sounding pads. Maybe automating a parameter of this pad will work.
The drums are also way too cheesy. Nothing much to say here.
Sorry for being harsh. Don't be too discouraged by this. Go ahead and do better next time. =)

SeeD419 responds:

lol it sounded exactly the way I wanted it to.

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Score
3.11 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 26, 2010
6:27 AM EDT
Genre
Ambient
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958 KB
1 min 2 sec

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