Very amature.

Basic chord progressions and poor recording but you stated that you have no real program what so ever, so I understand that. If you put some investment into a better mic and an actual music program, you could great some nice stuff with this song.

The arrangement is pretty solid and kept me interested throughout the whole song. I would suggest however is a stronger bridge because you it sounds like you only have a verse and a chorus. That's only a suggestion though, it sounds fine as it is if you don't want to change anything.

The guitar playing sounded a bit weak. There were some parts where it seemed you were struggling to play. It sounds like you hesitated sometimes if that makes it any clearer. Your singing is alright. You should get some singing lessons if you want to become better.

Overall, good start. Keep practicing and you'll get there overtime. If you want, I have a program that I could master / EQ your song better. All I'll need is just wav file of each instrument. I also can put in some drums and a bass to add a finishing touch to your songs. You don't have to, but you said you don't really have any good equipment so I could help you out until you get some. Send me a message if you are interested.

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Sorry lol

I feel bad for giving you less than a 10 with such an epic streak of 10's but I don't think it's THAT good. Don't get me wrong, you've got a great singing voice, and the guitar riffs are fantastic. The lyrics are good and don't sound cheesy or anything.

All in all I'd say it's a great song, not something I would personally ever listen to again, but you're a good musician so keep up the good work.

NICE 8D

nice song i give u 1o/1o

good

this make me calm

nice work

Sounded pretty good considering your equipment. All accomplished musicians started exactly where you are at some point, or at least I know I did. lol One thing though that threw me off about your guitar playing was when you played F#major instead of minor. Dunno if you did it on purpose but it kinda weirded me out. :P I suggest you keep an eye out for whatever music software you can find because it will really help you in so many different ways to have at least something aiding your creativity. Making stuff without any useful tools can really hold you back. There are all sorts of ways to cut costs but still get a nice sound with music production. Your computer mic gets the job done, but adds a lot of noise, so a good way to fix that is to go to your local Gamestop and buy a usb mic intended for some music game cause it will also work on a regular computer and it's much cheaper than going to a music store and getting any other usb mic. And if you have the money to invest, you could get a usb Snowball mic which still isn't much compared to others but will give you everything you ever need to record good quality live sound. As for softwares, there are various free ones out there if you google it, and that will really help you save some time and frustration. But based on what you pulled off without much to work with, I expect you'd be able to make positively great stuff with better tools. :) Just keep at it.