Don't Change It :D
It sounds wonderful already, I love this a little more than the original :D
I think its great as it is, but if you want to improve it, go ahead! I cant wait to hear more! It reminds me a little of the Pokemon songs, which is a compliment, i loved them too. I also think the pauses really add to the song!
Yeah, I liked the pokemon songs too. I guess I'll leave it as it is for now, unless I notice something that I could/should fix.
Thanks for the review man :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.